YOUR STORY IS VERY GOOD ; but lern more about the short stories.read more letest stories ,then try
to creat a vidya's style,and your own touch..
congrads...keep writing..
--Nidheesh'
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-Nidheesh Muthambalam, AL-KHOBAR,
