jeevithathinte kanapurangal

jeevithathinte kanapurangalTheme is good but presentation have to better .

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-praveenlal g, calicut,

Samakaleeyam,..... nithya prashnam

Samakaleeyam,..... nithya prashnamWell written, nice imagination... but the subject was a bit too cliche.

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-vipin k viswan, Kakkanad,

LIFE AND DEATH

LIFE AND DEATHAADYAMAYE KADHAAKARANTEY PERARIYAN AAGRAHIKKUNNU...EE JEEVITHATHEY SNEHIKKUMBOZHUM ARIYATHEY MARANATHINTEY ORU PRANAYALOKAM NAMMALYELLAM KAATHIRIKKUNNU ENNU ATHI BHANGIYAAYITHANNEY WRITER CHITHIRIKKUNNU....SARALAMAAYA VAAKUKALIL ORUPAADU THALANGALILEK KONDUPOKAAN KADHAAKARANU KAZHINJIRIKKUNN

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-AHAMMED KABEER, DUBAI,

vazhakkad

vazhakkadIthu nadan sreenivasan kadha moshtichu sinimayaakkiyathinu pakaram moshtichathaano?

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-soosan, malappuram,

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nice

nicenice story

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-shiny, cherthala,

Good

Goodvalare nalla oru kadhayanu,jevithathinte oro mugham

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-amina, ksa,

Nagarakkolangal

NagarakkolangalVery good story-pls read all pravasi

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-Sajeer Khalasi, Riyadh,

Colloquial dialogue

Colloquial dialogueThe story could have written better, if the over colloquial dialogues have been reduced. Those residing in the South Kerala find it difficult to grasp the situation in most occasions.

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-Suresh Kumar, Kochi,

Excellent

ExcellentExcellent story.

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-Suresh Kumar, Kochi,

very good

very goodvalare manoharamaya katha. gulfinte mattoru mukham

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-nazarbasheer, jeddah,

Simplicity

Simplicityit is so nice.

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-Basheer Thoppil, Madina,

Good

GoodI mean to say, it is good, that's all.

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-Basheer Thoppil, Madina,

good one

good onei like it.really different.keep writing such stories.all the best.

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-imily, imily,

very good story

very good storynalla avtharanam.enthu nalla ending.really enjoyed the story.good work

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-aruna, kollam,

Nagarakkolangal

NagarakkolangalRealy heart touching

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-Jameela Y, KSA,

nalla kadha

nalla kadhaishtapettu

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-akhilasimon, moolamattam,

nanayi

nanayiSarikkum rasichu vayichu..nalla kadhyanu

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-Sreeltha, kerala,

nalla kadha

nalla kadhabhoopadam nivarunnundu.very good story

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-akhilasimon, ernakulam,

nalla kadha

nalla kadhayandrikathayil ninnum akannu,manohangalaya bimbangalumayi paranju povunna kadha.ishtamayi.

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-ado thomas, alleppey,

nice

nice barthavinte arikileke povan parayendethinu pakaram afrikayileke athurasevanathinu senikunna malagayude manasikavastha ethra alojichittum eniku manasilakunilla

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-bapoos, abudhabi,

Very good

Very goodCongrats

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-Jamal, Jeddah,

abhipraaya dhwani

abhipraaya dhwani

nalla thought process.. i like that.. climaxilekkulla pachilil alpam dridhi koodippoyo ennu samsayam..
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kollam

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-dhwani, ahmadi,

nallakatha

nallakathavalare nannu

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-muthulakshmi, tvm,

nalla story

nalla storykadha nannayitunde.good one.i like it.

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-aravind kumar, pattambi,ottapalam,

nice story

nice storyread the story.very good one.different theme.nice presentation.good language.all the best.

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-anand, ernakulam,

very good

very goodnice story

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-saifudeen, kozhikode,

It has everything in it!

It has everything in it!very nice one! keep it up.

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-Sugathamma cheriyan mathew punnavila, chicago,

GREAT

GREATREALISTIC STORY WITH A CONTEMPORARY RELEVANCE.

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-SHINI, DUBAI,

very nostalgic story

very nostalgic storySorry, I cannot write in malayalam from my computer. Really interesting and very nostalgic story. Really pulling us to go back to our youthhood daus.

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-Mohanan K.N., Muscat,

Maya

MayaNice story

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-Sayooj.T.P., Thiruvangad,

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Good Story

Good StoryKATHA KOLLAM BUT CRAFT NANNAVANAM

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-AJITHAN MENOTH, pudurkara, Thrissur-3,

prachannam

prachannamvery good

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-shynimol, kuwait,

great

greatreally great

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-james, jeddah,

നല്ലത്

നല്ലത്നല്ലത്

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-കിഷോര്‍ എം സി, എറണാകുളം,

VERY NICE

VERY NICEkeep it up

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-shani anvar, KAYAMKULAM,

good story

good storyvery differnt style of feminine writing ... humour and narrative style is quite differntiative from other women story writers... the imprint of localised elements also is specific..

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-bauraj, kodungallur,

Nice

NiceOruvaayana sugham labhikkunnundu,congrats

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-Rincy, Dammam,

Excellent......

Excellent......I could not help crying...........
thnx for such a touching story..........

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-Smitha Viju, Dwaraka,

nalla cherukatha

nalla cherukathagood short story!

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-p jayakumar, aurangabad,

Excellent...

Excellent...I feel like this is my own story since I am also an IT professional......

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-Ajith Menon, Singapore,

സമാന്തരപാതകളിലെ വ്യസനയാത്രകള്‍

സമാന്തരപാതകളിലെ വ്യസനയാത്രകള്‍സമാന്തരപാതകളിലെ വ്യസനയാത്രകള്‍.......സുനില്‍ പി.മതിലകത്തിന്റെ കഥ വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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simply good

simply good we know the things , we have the same feel , this things are came in our chats ,but u collect all and present it good

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-Bhim , kochin,

Maya

Mayamarvels

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-sreekanth, eranakulam,

mechanical narrative too..

mechanical narrative too..i liked it and voted. the story is good as it honestly narrates the life conditions in outsourcing companies.

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-abdul vahid v , manjeri ,

great

greatgreat work

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-ms ashokan, kochi,

good story

good storyone of the good story from sabeena. wishing u the best

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-zakariya, riyadh,

excellent

excellentstory of new society

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-atithagopan, kallara,

touching story

touching storyv.good,, touching,.pained my heart.

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-kala jayakumar, faheel,

very good

very goodnice story

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-R.GOPAKUMAR, kilimanoor,

nice

nicenice story

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-a.m.hassan, kuwait,

എന്റെ സിന്ദൂരച്ചെപ്പ്

എന്റെ സിന്ദൂരച്ചെപ്പ്എന്റെ സിന്ദൂരച്ചെപ്പ്......തോമസ് മാത്യു പാറയ്ക്കലിന്റെ കോളം വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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രാഷ്ട്രീയമോ.. ഞാനില്ല...!

രാഷ്ട്രീയമോ.. ഞാനില്ല...!രാഷ്ട്രീയമോ.. ഞാനില്ല.......സിനിമാലോകം കാണുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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കാവ്

കാവ്കാവ്......അശോകിന്റെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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എന്റെ കവിത

എന്റെ കവിതഎന്റെ കവിത......ഉമേഷ് നായരുടെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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പ്രണയം...

പ്രണയം...പ്രണയം.......ധനേഷ് കാട്ടൂപ്പാടത്തിന്റെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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valare nannayitunde.

valare nannayitunde.maranathinu puthiya mugham nalkiyirikkunnu.valare nalla presentation.

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-hyma ramachandran, ottapalam.palakkad,

good one

good onenalla avtharanam.last vere suspence keep chaithittunde.all the best

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-anitha.santosh, bangalore,

good story

good storyit touched my heart.nice way of presentation.all the best

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-ardra, chittur,

nalla kadha

nalla kadhakadha avishkaranam nannayitunde.puthiya krithikkalkke asamsakal.

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-ambika, palakkad,

കൊള്ളാം

കൊള്ളാം

പരസ്യങ്ങളുടെ മറ്റൊരു മുഖം. നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്.

check out this website for your translation needs:http://www.google.com/transliterate/indic/Malayalam

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-ജെഫി, അടൂര്‍,

Great poem

Great poemI think poems like this should be read and encouraged. Great work .

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-anitalekshman, Trivandrum,

good one

good oneTried to bring out certain serious social issues with great sense of humor.... and suceedded,..... well almost.

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-Badri Nath, New Delhi,

Nice

NiceNicely portrayed

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-Babu, Kerala,

ജോലി ഉപേക്ഷിക്കണോ?

ജോലി ഉപേക്ഷിക്കണോ?ജോലി ഉപേക്ഷിക്കണോ?.....ടി.ആര്‍. പ്രേംകുമാറിന്റെ നാട്ടറിവ് വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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കടിഞ്ഞാണുകള്‍

കടിഞ്ഞാണുകള്‍കടിഞ്ഞാണുകള്‍.....ഫൈസല്‍ ഇളയടത്തിന്റെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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കേരളം: ഒരു പ്രതികരണ കവിത

കേരളം: ഒരു പ്രതികരണ കവിതകേരളം: ഒരു പ്രതികരണ കവിത......സാബു ഷണ്മുഖത്തിന്റെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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GOOD

GOODBakikai kathirikunnu.

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-THAMPURATTI, KOLLAM,

nice

nicesimple and touching story
love karyamai feel cheyunnilla

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-midhun, kochi,

HEART TOUCHING!!

HEART TOUCHING!!

We can't buy a kiss of mother from Market.
My lovable mother at home left from the Earth on last August. Not able to express my grief....

NICE STORY

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-abhi, Kerala,

good

goodvery good and nice

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-shenoy kr, ernakulam,

wonder full story

wonder full storyethanu sarikkum subject ulla kadha.oru cheriya sambhavathe ethra manoharamayi aavishkarichirikkunnu,wonderful.really good.i enjoyed it.

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-anoop menon, palakkad,

very nice

very nice story presentation in different style.cool description of death is very touching.
really good stuff.

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-anitha, bangalore,

very good one

very good onenice way of presentation.nalla originality thonni.all the best for you

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-chandrasekharan, thrissur,

valare nannayitunde.

valare nannayitunde.kadha vayichu,kadhakke anuyogiamaya thalakettum kodukkan kadhakrithinu kazhinju.iniyun nalla krithikal undavan prarthikkunnu.

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-hymavathi, ottapalam,

EXCALLENT STORY

EXCALLENT STORYHeart touching story. keep itup.

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-NAJIYAJALEEL, Thaikattukara Aluva.,

kathayile Puthuma

kathayile Puthuma

This story is extreamely interesting with the new theme that the author has used. congratulations to this unknown author

chandran Ponattil
Ottapalam

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-Chandran Ponattil, Ottapalam,

Nice!!!

Nice!!!Good Story

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-Dhanya Prakash, Florida,

roy sarinte elite views

roy sarinte elite views

savarna, sambanna, educated vargangal mathrame 'bharichal nannavoo' ennathu keralam poloru pradesathu engine seriyavum roy sare?

when 80% of people in a panchyath ward are low income, how dare will they be to knock at the door of their member if the member is a rich NRI retiree in case of an emergency? How comfortable the NRI to open the door fearing about security?

keralathile oru sadharankkarante prasnangal ariyanum, athu vendapole manassilaaaki theerumanam edukkanum nallathu roy sar parayunna full time rashtreeyam joli ayavar thanneyaanu. oru pavapetta auto riksha drivero paintero vaikunneram vellamadichu bahalam vechathinu police pidichal, roy sarinte illiterate rashtreeyakkaran panchayath member avane rathri police stationil ninnum irakkum, NRI retiree anangilla. Avan rathreel police stationil ninnum irangiyillengil pitte divasathe daily collection kaaranum, chitti kaaranum kodukkam kaasu aaru undakkum?
chindikkanam roy sare chindikkanam...

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-jaison, tampa,

ellam ozzinayal engineya?

ellam ozzinayal engineya?

pavithran nalloru pusthakam ezhuthiyal athu free ayi kodukkumo? oralude srishti nallathanengil, athu medikkan alundennu avarkku thonnunnu engil avar athu vittu kassakkatte pavithra. engilalle purogathi undakoo?
free aya DD malayalathinte kaltahekku pokanam ennu nirbhamdham pidikkamo? athokke mathiyo innathe kalathil?

-jaison
samrajya kuthaka aya americayile floridayil ninnum
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-jaison, tampa,

Good Poems

Good PoemsGood poems, congrats....expecting more

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-Rahul, Texas,

Girijakkoru Muri - short story

Girijakkoru Muri - short storyA good story giving bold message for family relationships.

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-Josey, WS Atkins, Sharjah,

Touching story

Touching storyVery nice..touching story

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-Rahul, Texas,

BAD PREDICTION

BAD PREDICTIONIT-YIL 10000 JOB VACANCY OND. EE PREDICTION THATTIPPA

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-MANDAN, TVM,

story repley

story repley

Hellow,

Its A Good Story
Congajulations...........

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-leni mambillil..........., Alkhor,

Very Good

Very Goodപുതിയ എഴുത്തുകാര്‍ക്ക് ഒരു പ്രേജോതനം ആകട്ടെ നിങ്ങള്‍

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-Johnson George, Jubail,

heart touching experience

heart touching experiencerincy devasia is my best friend we are together in the collage,same room and same class,its surprising that she is a wonderful writer.rincy i apreciate you weldone.i wish you became a good writer.

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-bimeesha, idukki,

a mature story

a mature storythis story is an experience of a journalist,but it is the view of a student she must be well experienced with the burning thruths of life.thats why she can write about the poor heart of a street boy.new generation is aware of the up coming issues of the present world

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-nisha k sunny, kottayam,

congratulations

congratulations"This Story is closly related to current situation"Good Work....

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-Sithesh, Dubai,

good

goodvery good

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-shailaja hussain, ernakulam,

Fabulous

FabulousGreat story

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-Priya Mohan, Thiruvananthapuram,

Girijakkoru Muri

Girijakkoru MuriThis story is given to every one a good message

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-K.J.Jome Joseph, Kuwait ,

Congratulations!!!

Congratulations!!! Excellant Narration !!1 A nice piece of original creativity!!!

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-Prof TB Vijayakumar , Thrissur,

kaalakhattathinte kadha

kaalakhattathinte kadhaInnathe madhyama samskarathinte manushythwa rahithamaya sameepanathe thurannu kanikkunna kadha. pakshe aa sameepanathinte dhosha phalangale chithreekarikkunnathil ee kadha athra vijayichittilla. kadhayil drashyamakunnathilum valare valiya prathyakhathangal innathe mosham madhyama samskarathinte phalamayi ulavakunnundu. enkilum ellavarude ullilum manushyathwam urangikkidakkunnundu ennu theliyikkan ee kadhakku kazhinju.

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-Jijo Eldhose, Kothamangalam,

nice

nicevayichapppol ullil evideyo oru nombaram thonnii like this story very nice.thanks to purushothaman k k

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-sadik , manama,

Good

GoodGood story

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-Vijayan, Malappuram,

Well done

Well donevery nice keep it up

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-Shareef, mranchery,kerala,

Ente Abhipraayam...

Ente Abhipraayam...

Critical
* Loose plot
* Less detailing

Debatable
* No explanation to children's behaviour towards the end.
* No explanation to the detail in scene 1.(Bharya kaaranam chodikkumbol sudheesh kaaryangal vyakthamaakkunnu.)

But,
* Nice theme
* The child's point of view

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-Sudeep Moothamana, Nedumbassery,

padatte malayalam

padatte malayalammazha padatte eniyum kavithakal thankalude thoolikayil ninnundavatte malayalam eniyum padatte ningaliloode sivaprasad thanka you

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-sujith nayanar, kottyam,

cinemanubhavangal

cinemanubhavangalsamanamaya chila ciemanubhavangal orthu ith vayichappol.ANTONY QUINN abhinayicha LION OF THE DESERT orthu pokunnu.kim ki dukinte THE BOW,SPRING SUMMER WINTER AUTUMN poleyulla cinemakal vallatha anubhaa lokamanu thannath.

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-rahman kidangayam, pandallur,

soooper...!1

soooper...!1nalla aashayam
kurikku kollunnu....!
abhnandanam arhikkunna cartoooon....

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-giffu melatur , melattur ,

kavitha

kavithaPadhyareethiyil ulla kavithakal alle nallathu, ee gadhya kavithakal aarkku venam? "aaru vaangum innaaru vaangum" thudangiya sundarakaavya samkalpangalil muzhuki irikkunna saadharanakkaranu ee post modernism niranja kavithakal engine ishtapedan?

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-sanjay kumar, New Delhi,

suraasuvineppole

suraasuvineppoledayaneeyamayi maricha SURAASU enna aale ppole ippol, AYYAPPANUM......
lahariyude thalkkalika sukhathil santhosham kandethunnavarkku oru paadam koodi.
ayyappaneyum surasuvineyum john abrahamineyum anukarikkunnavarkku, maranavum oru dakshinyavum nalkilla ennu orikkal koodi...
sadacharamulla jeevitham nayikkuka.
lahariye thurathiyodikkuka..
kudumpam enna establishmentil abhayam theduka
kallum ,kanchavum undenkile kaviyaakoo, ezhuthukaaranaakoo enna mandatharam manassilaakkuka.
AYYAPPANTE jeevithavum maranavum ellavarkkum oru paadam aakatte..!

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-devan dass, perinthalmanna ,

Nice Story

Nice StoryI read and felt it very good..

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-Anu, Jeddah,

Nice Story

Nice StoryRefreshing story about relationships and the society.

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-Sajeev and Sindya, Dubai,

Outstanding

OutstandingIts a very nice haunting story. I loved it.

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-Abhijith, Quilon,

KAVIYEE

KAVIYEEA AYYAPPAN MARICHU ENNALUM KAVITHAYIL JEEVITHAM MANAKKUNNA SIVAPRASADINE POLULLAVAR MALAYALATHIL ENIYUM UNDAVATTE

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-SALABHA S NAIR, THRISSUR,

realistic

realisticnice presentation.........keep it up...........

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-sabeena, Riyadh,

Prachannam

Prachannamvery good story

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-Babu, kuwait,

മുറിവ് തുന്നുന്ന അയ്യപ്പന്‍

മുറിവ് തുന്നുന്ന അയ്യപ്പന്‍മുറിവ് തുന്നുന്ന അയ്യപ്പന്‍.....സലിം ചേനത്തിന്റെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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കാര്‍ട്ടൂണ്‍

കാര്‍ട്ടൂണ്‍കാര്‍ട്ടൂണ്‍......ബാബു ആലപ്പുഴയുടെ കവിത വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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ആത്മാവിഷ്കാരത്തിന്റെ തീവ്രതയുള്ള കവിതകള്

ആത്മാവിഷ്കാരത്തിന്റെ തീവ്രതയുള്ള കവിതകള്ആത്മാവിഷ്കാരത്തിന്റെ തീവ്രതയുള്ള കവിതകള്‍......പ്രൊഫ.ടോണി മാത്യുവിന്റെ പുസ്തകപരിചയം വായിക്കുക.

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-എഡിറ്റര്‍ പുഴ ഡോട്ട് കോം, ആലുവ,

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