Dear Mr.Joseph
The first stanza is somewhat good. The last is a quotation. The rest having no poetic sense which can be a subject or study for a feature for any one of the periodcals. A poem should not be "spontaneous overflow of powerful emotions" but it would be better, if it contains any one of the elements like that.
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