Tuesday, March 2, 2010

a pointless story

a pointless story
you have a good style. But I think you are not aware of the art of editing. you have to remove many things from this story which prevent the readers to read the story. Be a good reader and red your story again and again. then you will find out the problem of your story. Too much informations do not work efectivelly

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-Raghavan, trvandrum,



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