simple but lacks curiosityi like the poem. what I have to suggest is that present day generation lack the ethos of past as well as the ethics of past. we cannto club these two things together. as a poet can you synthesis the ethics of past with ethics of present. it is highly inflamable. please try to write poems which are akin to the shoulders of present generation ie. a compramise to modernity with our encient ethos. may god bless you and help you write more
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