Enjoyed both the poems - the second one for its subject and the first one is really poetic.
One point - In the first poem, while the whole poem goes smooth with the subject of Thamara and Baratham and even the feelings and love of the "gnan", the fourth stanza looks out of place for me with its sudden turn to the subject of philosophy inspite of the rishivaryan's remarks about ulthadam and padmam. I repeat it is MY understanding or lack of understanding.
Once again thanks for the poems
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-Prasad, Kuwait - Coimbatore,
