Dear Writer
Read your story during busy hours. Would love to read it again in another mood. The skill of writing is good. Flow is poetic. I am sure your realm should not just be short-stories but novels as well. Elements of unreasonability and dramatization observed in this particular story are the areas I personally feel you can keep in mind to make your future creations more natural, which we are impatiently looking forward for.
Congrats!
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-Editor Disha, Kochi,
