Good, could be better, thanks.

Good, could be better, thanks.I really liked the story. However, I wish the transition from present to past was better narrated. For few minutes I lost the author and did not know the connection between the courier service girl and stories' turning point. Nevertheless, towards the end, the story made more sense, had better connection. I must say, the choice of the title is excellent. As an NRI, I can appreciate and relate to this story very much. Use of jargons such as 'puliyilakkara', 'velichenna', old class room, filled duster, etc... took me back to the good old village life I once had as a kid. Thanks for taking me back to those days for few minutes. Indeed, needles of your clock/story took me back in time. Well done.

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-Jaya M., New Jersey, USA.,